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Post  KBlack Sun 26 Sep 2010, 4:27 am

Ok I have a few questions so I can better figure out what NPCs would logically talk about and what services they can offer:

1- What are fixers expected to do in the game? Sell mission-specific information (this would be cool)? Help buy/sell black market stuff?
2- Same thing about the entertainer in the arena, is he a pimp? a bookie?
3- As I understand it, "The Wall" is a small shady bank the player can use?
4- What's the Vamal gate?

If some of the answers aren't specified, we can work together on finding them :p


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Post  Ramos Sun 26 Sep 2010, 4:34 am

OMG !
Welcome Kblack !
ill try to answer your questions as brief as i can:

1. fixers - they can provide certain items at lower costs(usually ammo medikits or weapons) or sometimes unique items that you cannot find in shops .or some unique services like : removing implants, deleting head hunter bounty on your head etc

2. entertainer = something like bookie , in the arena you can only do 1 vs 1 for money match something like the thunder dome in mad max or like the colosseum in rome

3. the wall(not the best name i had ...) its a corp , the player can have secondary missions like:
- recover this package from corp
- an employer of the wall wants to change his job but the boss doesn't let him and he is held there against his will so save him
- go in that corp and hack their system

4. customs gate is the way to go out of the city and travel to the next city , and cause first version will be single player and only 1 city, the ending of the game must take place at customs gate when you leave this city behind and travel to the next one
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Post  KBlack Sun 26 Sep 2010, 4:42 am

Ever played the shadowrun genesis game? You could sell fixers sensitive data you found on the matrix and it would attribute it a random price. It would be cool to be able to do something like that here, to help hackers grind some cash towards their pricey cyberdecks and stuff.
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Post  Ramos Sun 26 Sep 2010, 4:52 am

Shadowrun for sega is my main source of inspiration lol
and yes some fixers can buy matrix data (like roco lol)
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Post  KBlack Sun 26 Sep 2010, 4:54 am

Here's the start so you can gauge whether that's what you want:

https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1nYcHXXyiF2S7uOEkFlIBh5thrsngB8g0xAR5Wl8o-5I&hl=en#

I wrote up 3 characters real quick.
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Post  Guest Sun 26 Sep 2010, 5:59 am

how do i open it ?

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Post  Ramos Sun 26 Sep 2010, 6:56 am

Does not work for me either i dont have a google account , can anyone mail it to me ?
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Post  KBlack Sun 26 Sep 2010, 7:07 am

Damn, I thought it would work. I'll try to work it out when I get home tomorrow.
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Post  Sam Sun 26 Sep 2010, 7:13 am

nope,i cant access it either,although i have a google account. it says that my account has not been granted permission to that document,the owner must approve my request for access...
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Post  SADoff Sun 26 Sep 2010, 6:44 pm

If u want to share some code or doc file or tables , please use googledocs (don't forget to give permissions to watch for anyone ). This portal allows you to look at docs without registration
This is an example https://spreadsheets.google.com/ccc?key=0AgwMrpKrvUBQdDJ2b3I0YS1McEZNUElDUElxcUttbWc&hl=en

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Post  KBlack Mon 27 Sep 2010, 3:58 am

OK I've changed permissions to "public on the web". Could someone tell me if it works? Also give your thoughts on the content.

https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1nYcHXXyiF2S7uOEkFlIBh5thrsngB8g0xAR5Wl8o-5I&hl=en
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Post  Sam Mon 27 Sep 2010, 4:02 am

yep it works Very Happy
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Post  Ramos Mon 27 Sep 2010, 4:10 am

Works for me too


"I have to say I hoped you weren’t one of those newbies" - hahaha nice touch

For the 3 chat option of the first character you'll need charisma +2 to have it

SO the first char lines are perfect

second char line 3 - perfect looooooooooool nice description of android + humor

last char line 2 - ahahahahaha again nice humor touch

IN conclusion - its just what we were looking for , perfect
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Post  TheManYaK Mon 27 Sep 2010, 4:19 am

Nice Work Man cheers cheers cheers I Like It Twisted Evil Twisted Evil





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Post  yo beau iar Mon 27 Sep 2010, 4:34 am

1. fixers - they can provide certain items at lower costs(usually ammo medikits or weapons) or sometimes unique items that you cannot find in shops .or some unique services like : removing implants, deleting head hunter bounty on your head etc

and + upgrade (enchant or slots) for items to make them unique, something like that...

2. entertainer = something like bookie , in the arena you can only do 1 vs 1 for money match something like the thunder dome in mad max or like the colosseum in rome

yeah, nice idea... like a card game or other mini game to farm for money with limited time per day... on this idea we can make like a tournament of players... with point per win with bonus for 1st position... or something like that...

sorry for my bad english Very Happy im not a pro Very Happy

so when will the game be finished in alpha or beta test?

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Post  KBlack Mon 27 Sep 2010, 9:09 am

Uploaded a new version of the NPC speech, now with 11 characters:

https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1-GymrHInG_k7v-0HwJuulhXtjFCixEYdX1sb2MqK41k&hl=en

Waiting for your comments!
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Post  Ramos Mon 27 Sep 2010, 9:52 am

Of course , its perfect , the text length is also perfect but i will comment on all char text :
*NOTE: in red jackal entrance is free, in blue you gotta pay some money to enter or go free if you got rep above x lvl and in coco bongo you must have rep x lvl to enter

Anna 69 - give her a line in which she gives away that she is an android ,something like *hey are you human?"

winstone(mars ahahhaha) - LOOOOooooooooooooL i laughed so hard i woke up my gf Smile))))) *Notice I said “follow you”, not “go ahead and get killed in a suicide mission”.* + nice description of the blue guy although i was hoping to make the blue guy the strongest mercenary from this first city but its fine by me i laughed so hard haha

hawk - nice description , fits exactly the personality

Tina - hahaha , the girl knows her score + add an option that she sells discounted medikits(of some client that was drunk and forgot them or something(that option available only if charisma skill is x)

Stanley-nice chat

Dorian Tyrell- perfect side quest mission add + nice town description

Freeze-evil o_O sounds like caleb brightmore elf bodyguard ... evil

Goldman- ahahahahahahahahha very funny i like the guy's lines, arrogant and about the arena that sergey must answer he is the programmer but its a very good idea


PS: sam pls correct my grammatical mistakes, tnx in advance

IN the final version we must do some censor option , if censor is on it will appear f*** if you choose censor off it will appear fuck

Conclusion keep up the great work , its outstanding and it really shapes the universe, try making some info about the great war





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Post  KBlack Mon 27 Sep 2010, 10:03 am

Yeah Winston's name is a rip-off from Shadowrun on the genesis. I like doing that sometimes, referring to other works (check out everyone's name in Cocobongo, apart from Goldman, which is also a reference to something else).
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Post  Ramos Mon 27 Sep 2010, 10:07 am

easter eggs for the win
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Post  KBlack Mon 27 Sep 2010, 10:30 am

Also: Just because Winston says Goldman is a noob it doesn't mean that he is. It's all rumors at this point. He could be a potent swordsman, just new in town.
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Post  Sam Tue 28 Sep 2010, 12:28 am

PS: sam pls correct my grammatical mistakes, tnx in advance
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sure boss, right away Wink
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Post  TheManYaK Tue 28 Sep 2010, 12:44 am

Nice Work I Like It you the man cheers cheers cheers afro
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Post  KBlack Tue 28 Sep 2010, 1:20 am

Thanks for the kind words guys. I have to say the character art is a great inspiration.

Have you guys thought about the character creator? Will it have a fixed character, or will you get to choose gender, race? will you be allowed to make an android character?
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Post  Ramos Tue 28 Sep 2010, 1:25 am

Depends on what main plot and story we will pick up , best way is to make all possible scenarios at "First release Storyline" and by the end of the week to have a poll for voting what scenario should we use then we shall see if the char is a fixed one or you can customize it in race to
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Post  Nod_Nod_Nod Tue 28 Sep 2010, 11:05 pm

It will be good to have a poker game. I think it will give a nice feeling to the bars... We need some, right? Very Happy
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